From the moving clouds..mastering minds.!
Over the Love soil. The Bondage Cheers!
Still Love doors closed<>
A sound from heart..! Not the beat !
A search for Love! Not a Life??
Happy thoughts - An Angel nearby!
The other side of life - A white illusion - With a face smoked over the darker side!
Oh ! My Angel - A Flower not Near to feel the root's pain!
Painted with emotions - The Love days!
But ..They don't wait with Pain for few days.!
Even a Moon looks dull in the Morning.
A heart beats well on sharing!
Have a look at Love- The Eyes - You feel it closer When it is closed.
The Loneliness - Love to say YES!
Making my angel to feel my love......!!
Instead, could have walked without ways to find..
A love to bind!
Am feeling closer..more closer to you..than ever before..
With the broken mirror..Even after placing the foot over!
Hurt me! The Soul still holds the love - Always with LOVE!
Very nice writing, Koushik, but the profusion of images in between the poem tends to distract more than add value. You may want to put a picture on top and one after the poem, so that readers can focus on the written word. I hope you don't mind this unsolicited advice, and feel free to delete this comment after you have read it.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all , I would like to thank you for hitting a comment on my post! I always welcome a review on my posts, whether its positive or negative, I am not bothered. Your point was right. I will edit it as you said which will add due respect to your comment.Thank you! - Koushik
Deletenice feeling,well expressed! koushik :)
ReplyDeletekeep writing & smiling always :)
Thank you Sowmya!!
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